Sneak Peek 2

She saw it zipping overhead, beautifully illuminated by the moon. It’s wings were fully stretched, shimmering white, at least ten feet each. The mare was going pretty fast; it glided around the mountain again and again, making its way back to Molly within minutes before vanishing.

That was why Molly did not realize her rising feeling of unease. The forest had gone eerily quiet. The usual croaking and chirping and buzzing in the trees and greenery were replaced by silence. Molly wiped away some precipitation that had gathered on her forehead. She had stood in the same spot for a long time. She should’ve left when she had the chance instead of gaping at a flying horse. The moon was still up but day would come soon. No, it was too late. Predators would be on her by dawn. Molly wiped her forehead again.

Why was it so hot? She rocked from foot to foot, unsure what to do, with a growing sense of dread. There was something wrong. Something was very wrong. She had to go now. Why wasn’t she leaving? She looked down in dismay to see mud surrounding her knee-high, slick with moisture. So that’s why the animals were silent. They were watching her sink into quick-sand (or quick-mud) with amusement as she stood there like an idiot.
The earth made gleeful slurping sounds as it pulled her down. Molly tried to bring her left foot out of the muck, but it felt like stone. But why was she sinking? Why was the dirt so hot it was churning like quicksand? Only moments ago, she had been sitting down. Of course, time had passed, but not a lot.
She had been a little tired and decided to sit down. The relief from her aching legs had only lasted a moment . She couldn’t possibly get a good view from the ground! Besides, if some kind of poison-fanged, fire-spitting, cross-between-a-dog-and-a-cat came, she wouldn’t stand a chance. Not that she wanted to leave the flying horse…
The horse.
Molly looked back at the mountain, expecting the creature to be gliding around it, relaxing because it was safe in its domain. Instead she saw a bright light around the mountain, like a giant ring. Whatever feeling of awe she’d had before, it was nothing to the amazement she was feeling now. Indeed, it was radiating heat like fire would. In fact, Molly wouldn’t be surprised if a bright stream of white flame was trailing behind it.
Just looking at the beauty put Molly at a sense of tranquility. Even though her brain was screaming to GET OUT NOW, she found she couldn’t move. Why would she? The cool, soothing mud felt good against her cracked, dry skin. She hadn’t slept at all and the mare was so beautiful, arching across the mountain, splashing vivid colors across the stars. She could just sink into the earth and no one would know. Sleep for a couple of hours. Indeed her eyelids were growing heavy, urging her to rest. And what was that purring sound, like the slumber of a cat? Like the rumble of her messages at home? Like the slow, wry draw of dreams? Like a plane smoothly gliding among the birds? No, not a plane. A helicopter. And it was coming now!

Wild Survivors

Sally and Max ran from home to live in the wild. They built their home on a quiet meadow, far away from the city. They dug up some dirt and mixed it up with clay from a nearby river, sun baking it into blocks. These were called adobe, invented by native Americans long ago. The two friends had learned that in social studies class before they decided to leave. “It will be useful for the wild,” Sally said to Max at the beginning of the Indian unit. Max had been eager to get going. But Sally wanted to learn about how the Indians survived in the wild. Maybe, she thought, they could make a tribe of their own using a combination of all the past tribes’ cultures. Max liked the idea so they started out with adobe-brick houses. They also grew a garden of good vegetables and gathered wood from the nearby forest in case they would have to travel fast from predators or other hostile creatures. Then they made a schedule on huge bush leaves, scratching in the words with Max’s sharp stone, found at the river. Sally woke up early to smear mud on herself to look Indian-y and repel the bugs  before gathering firewood and herbs. All day after that, she would  weave their clothing from other huge leaves and the long, wavy grass that grew in the meadow. Her old cloths from her house were used as wash cloths and were far too dirty to be worn again.

Max woke up at exactly the same time as his friend and set out to hunt. While looking for game, and possibly some fresh, tasty, wild berries, he would gather freshwater from the river and gather huge tree branches in case he and Sally would ever face the prospect of running away. He also sharpened his rock on other rocks and carried huge, jagged boulders back to Camp. He and his friend were currently working on building a big stone wall around their space. It would mark their territory and, if it came to fighting predators such as wild wolves, they could simply hurl rocks while being protected by their structure. Today, Max found the perfect boulder. He dutifully picked it up along with today’s hunt-three squirrels, a couple of defense stones, and his own sharp rock.

Max had found his rock when he first explored the area with Sally. He had tripped near the river and fallen. He hadn’t been seriously injured but he had a deep wound from the rock. Amazed more than in pain, he had picked up the rock and called it his own. With enough patience and good enough stones for sharpening, he now had an even sharper, even more dangerous rock for defense.

Sally pulled out weeds. Instead of throwing them out, she took the greenest stalks and blew on them. The weeds made a sound kind of like a duck, but an animal responded. The animal was a sheep named Snowstorm. Her coat was grey and her kind was rare. Sally began clipping her fur with wooden sheers, tipped with stone. The sheep responded by baying and walking away. Sally let her go. Snowstorm was a free spirit, and was not meant to be cooped up in some kind of farm.

Sally started sawing at a tree, using a stone ax Max had stolen from his father when they escaped, until she found a piece of rope buried in the ground. Confused, she stuffed it in her pocket. Then she wandered a little farther into the wood. Sure, why not? The more you explore, the more you discover, right? She passed through the dense greenery and emerged on the other side, which was packed with snow. She couldn’t believe her eyes.

   Rearing on its muscular hind legs was a brilliant white horse. Its coat gleamed in the sunlight and its eyes were glassy, black pearls of intelligence. The horse snorted, and Sally knew he was getting ready to bolt. She had to act fast if he were to be hers. How amazed Max would be! Even if the occasional stallion trotted around their house, they never managed to capture it. It wasn’t worth it anyway.

Sally had no idea how to capture such a beauty, though. All she had was a flimsy piece of twine and an ax, which she doubted the stallion would take kindly to. She used the weeds she picked up earlier and threw them at the horse. He snorted suspiciously, pawing the snow, sending ice flying in every direction.

Eragon

I was looking at my posts the other day and was absolutely delighted when I found my I Am Number Four book review had gotten many comments, all of them compliments, and some of them saying how the person had read the book and loved it. Thank you to all my viewers who commented! You have inspired me to make another post on another of my favorites. This series is one I am currently reading, so please don’t spoil if you have already read it!

But first thing’s first. To all of you I Am Number Four fans, the new book, Fall of Five, has just come out! I haven’t read it yet because it has been checked out at the library and there are no copies left, but I know someone who has and I know it’s very good! Again if you are one of those early-readers who buy new books the day they come out, please don’t spoil anything!

Now for my recommendation. The Eragon series is very good. It is about dragons and dragon riders who fight Shades, who are people who have summoned spirits that have consumed them. I don’t recommend this book to anyone who does not like deaths in books. There is a couple within the whole series, and I have already read a few, even though I’m only on the second book! For those of you who love action however, this book is not some fairy-fantasy tale. The books are around 400 pages long, but they are so good, anyone who doesn’t like reading would get pulled through them. Also, if you have read the I Am Number Four series, you would probably like