Here are some feedback questions for my pieces. When you comment, consider answering the questions that follow based on each story I have posted on this blog. Refer to the stories if you need to.

This feedback paper refers to Moonlight at the Beach, The Three Unicorns, and Burning ice. Pick letter choices for each individual story.

1. What do you think of the title of each of the stories?

a) The titles do not match the writing at all. What I expected from [this] piece is not what was shown. The title was not well-thought and the author did not spend enough time thinking of an appropriate choice.

b) The title was O.K and fit the story, but it could have been better. It is appropriate for the piece but poorly chosen. I think the author should at least rethink of a better title suited for this piece.

c) The title is perfect for this writing. It brings out the tone and mood of the piece. It was well-thought out and cleverly chosen. I recommend the author not change the title.

d) None of the above. I have my own opinion:_________________________________________________________________________________________________.

2. What do you think of the ending of this piece? Does it really leave you yearning for more or is it brief and boring?

a) The ending was not very cleverly written. When it ended, I did not wonder about the cliffhanger, if there was any. It was a bad way to end a piece like that. I strongly advise the author to revise the whole ending from paragraph number ___ to paragraph number ___.

b) The ending left me thinking about it, but did not affect me as much as it could. Weak ending and minimum signs of making the reader think about what she or he just read. I suggest the author think about editing some sections.

c) FANTASTIC! The cliffhanger, if there was one, left me wondering about what happened. If there wasn’t one, the end paragraph(s) is beautifully written and I wouldn’t tire if asked to read the last section again.

d) None of the above. I have my own opinion:_________________________________________________________________________________________________.

3. How good is the story itself?

a)  Poorly written and very bad. The hook did not capture my attention and the story did not make sense. The cliffhanger, if there was any, was weak and I strongly advise you revise the whole piece.

b) There are very few grammatical mistakes and I do not like some of the writing, but overall, it was good.

c) Everything is nearly perfect or very perfect. The words are carefully chosen and very colorful. Wouldn’t change anything.

4. Check every dot that is true in your opinion.

• I love this story.
• I dislike this story.
• This story affects me
• This story brings me to tears.
• This story teaches a lesson.

Thanks for giving me your opinion!!!